This week we have been writing about
I found it easy to I found it easy to copy and paste it on to my blog.
I found it tricky to write it in my writing book before I put it on my blog.
my digital learning object as I can copy and paste a Google doc on to my blog.
Animals Should Not Be Kept In Cages, Zoos Or Circuses
Would you like to be kept in a cage,whipped, rely on humans to survive, be taken away from your habitat, even taken away from your family and friends? No you wouldn't! I strongly believe it is cruel to keep animals in cages,zoos and circuses.
Animals are losing their ability to hunt. Tourists feed the animals junk food and the animals are getting obese I think this is cruel and mean. Sometimes they get heart disease and diabetes.
Secondly they are taken away from their habitat. Lack of freedom means their muscles shutdown. Some countries can be too hot or too cold for the animals in zoos. Some polar bears have to lie on plastic Icebergs instead of real Icebergs.
Thirdly the animals get taken away from their family and friends. Babies are taken away from their mums. Elephants are social creatures and they get sad when they are not in a herd. Elephants will be depressed and sometimes even die if they are not in a group.
Hi Willie
ReplyDeleteI am Jaimee a student from Matawai school. At our school we have also done writing on if we think Zoos are cruel or not and I also think they are cruel and should be banned. This is a very nice piece of writing and the paragraphing is done well. Good job Willie.
Thanks Jaimee
Hi Willie
ReplyDeleteI am a student at Matawai School. We did some writing on Zoo'S and thought about whether or not they are cruel and should be banned too. I agree with you that they should be banned. I did not know that elephants can die if they're not in their herd. Where is your school? Matawai school is a country school.
Blair.
Talofa Willie, My name is Aarya and I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I thought that your blog post was really kind because you are writing about animals to be free. I do believe in your blog because I love animals and I want them to be free. Maybe next time you could reread and write a bit more about your feeling about animals. What if you had a pet dog what would you do keep it or let it free? Check out my blog it's https://wpsaaryas.blogspot.com/.Blog you later!
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